Sunday, November 11, 2007

My Favourite Poem

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved and were loved, and now we lie
In Flanders fields.

Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

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McCrae's "In Flanders Fields" remains to this day one of the most memorable war poems ever written. It is a lasting legacy of the terrible battle in the Ypres salient in the spring of 1915. Here is the story of the making of that poem:
Although he had been a doctor for years and had served in the South African War, it was impossible to get used to the suffering, the screams, and the blood here, and Major John McCrae had seen and heard enough in his dressing station to last him a lifetime.

As a surgeon attached to the 1st Field Artillery Brigade, Major McCrae, who had joined the McGill faculty in 1900 after graduating from the University of Toronto, had spent seventeen days treating injured men -- Canadians, British, Indians, French, and Germans -- in the Ypres salient.

It had been an ordeal that he had hardly thought possible. McCrae later wrote of it:

"I wish I could embody on paper some of the varied sensations of that seventeen days... Seventeen days of Hades! At the end of the first day if anyone had told us we had to spend seventeen days there, we would have folded our hands and said it could not have been done."

One death particularly affected McCrae. A young friend and former student, Lieut. Alexis Helmer of Ottawa, had been killed by a shell burst on 2 May 1915. Lieutenant Helmer was buried later that day in the little cemetery outside McCrae's dressing station, and McCrae had performed the funeral ceremony in the absence of the chaplain.

The next day, sitting on the back of an ambulance parked near the dressing station beside the Canal de l'Yser, just a few hundred yards north of Ypres, McCrae vented his anguish by composing a poem. The major was no stranger to writing, having authored several medical texts besides dabbling in poetry.

In the nearby cemetery, McCrae could see the wild poppies that sprang up in the ditches in that part of Europe, and he spent twenty minutes of precious rest time scribbling fifteen lines of verse in a notebook.

A young soldier watched him write it. Cyril Allinson, a twenty-two year old sergeant-major, was delivering mail that day when he spotted McCrae. The major looked up as Allinson approached, then went on writing while the sergeant-major stood there quietly. "His face was very tired but calm as we wrote," Allinson recalled. "He looked around from time to time, his eyes straying to Helmer's grave."

When McCrae finished five minutes later, he took his mail from Allinson and, without saying a word, handed his pad to the young NCO. Allinson was moved by what he read:

"The poem was exactly an exact description of the scene in front of us both. He used the word blow in that line because the poppies actually were being blown that morning by a gentle east wind. It never occurred to me at that time that it would ever be published. It seemed to me just an exact description of the scene."

In fact, it was very nearly not published. Dissatisfied with it, McCrae tossed the poem away, but a fellow officer retrieved it and sent it to newspapers in England. The Spectator, in London, rejected it, but Punch published it on 8 December 1915.

5 comments:

  1. Dale, my eyes fill every time I hear or read that poem. This year on Armistice Day Colin and I stood amongst maybe thirty or forty people in the coastal township of Apollo Bay, and listened to it read in front of the war memorial. During World War One the town had a truly tiny population, but there are still the names of some fifteen young men carved on that memorial who went to fight in that war and never came back. Just boys, many of them.

    We went to visit those battlefields when we were in France three years ago. In war cemeteries we walked amongst the rows and rows of graves with Australian names, and saw the places where they lost their lives alongside so many others. And of course vast as the Australian cemetaries are, they're tiny compared to others. Even now, farmers working the land in fields which still show the outlines of trenches occasionally find the remains of soldiers who have lain unmarked for so many years.

    It was winter, so no poppies, but the overwhelming sense of sadness and waste ... we never learn.

    Thanks for sharing the story of the poem Dale.

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  2. I love the poem too, Dale. I remember seeing McCrae's name and a few lines from the poem inscribed on the outer walls of Eilean Donan Castle (seat of the McCrae clan) on our way to the Isle of Skye during our 2001 trip to Scotland. It made me feel at home so far from home.

    Thanks for putting it up.

    xx
    AM

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  3. I just remembered something - when she was about ten, Em was chosen to read that poem at her primary school assembly on Remembrance Day. She felt that to do it justice she should learn and speak it, rather than just read it. She was right - it was incredibly moving. Such a gently powerful, achingly sad piece of writing.

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  4. That is a very moving poem Dale, and interesting account of how it came about, makes the poem even more so moving..
    I watched a one off drama on TV last night called
    'My Boy Jack' about the Son of Rudyard Kipling, Who signed up for battle in the trenches of World War 1 only to go missing on his first day of action. His parents searched for several years to find out what became of their boy. They eventually found out he had been killed in the Battle of Loos and this radically altered the way Kipling viewed the war...he wrote "If any question why we died/ Tell them, because our fathers lied"...He felt guilt for getting his Son in the army when he had bad eyesight..
    The part of Jack was played by Daniel Radcliffe (Harry Potter). This is the Poem Kipling wrote for his son..

    Have you news of my boy Jack?"
    Not this tide.
    "When d'you think that he'll come back?"
    Not with this wind blowing, and this tide.
    "Has any one else had word of him?: "
    Not this tide.
    For what is sunk will hardly swim,
    Not with this wind blowing, and this tide.
    "Oh, dear, what comfort can I find?"
    None this tide,
    Nor any tide,
    Except he did not shame his kind--
    Not even with that wind blowing, and that tide.

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  5. So moving Dale. The breadth and scope that was the tragedy of WW1 always gets to me and this poem says it all. As Margie says, real lump in the throat poetry. I've always noticed that WW1 is regarded as the most tragic by Britain and it seemed to hurt the British people the most, and everything I've ever read about it bears that out. My visit to the war cemetaries there in northern France and Flanders was one of the most heart wrenching experiences I've ever had. All those thousands and thousands of young men, so many of whom were not even out of their teens.

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